i, don't capitalize, and, use punctuation: creatively;

it was a (golden) afternoon;
you were :there:
((but you weren't)) whispered the trees:;
...
if. i. had. known. i'd. never.
((have))
tried.
if for someinstantyouwereeverthere.
[please] let [me] know;
it would please [me]
to know that my {hands} upturning
-your
-past
-lives
were
((welcome)) whispered the earth;;